I found that when I was doing my Preliminary task, I was just kinda playing around with the effects. Now that I look at it, the front of the page has too many effects on it. As I had never used photosop before, I was kinda of lost on what to do, so I played around on it for a few hours and gradually I found my way and realised how to do the effects and do the basic cut outs and understanding the layering steps.
Comparing the magazines that I have created, I really think that I have improved in camerawork. In my prelim magazine, the photos were all kinda the same. They had the same expressions on the models unlike my final magazine. The first thing that came into my mind about what the pictures were going to look like for my final magazine at the start was that I wanted it to be fun, I wanted the model laughing and having a good time because when you see a real laughing photo, it makes you smile. So that was what I wanted to achieve when I was taking the pictures for my real magazine. I had the model try and few different expressions, and the first time I saw the photo that is now on the cover, I knew that it had to be used as the cover photo.
When using photoshop, I found that I had better experience at editing and cutting out the photos this time, like using the lasso tool to cut out the images. For example with the front cover, I had to cut down from the neck down of the model to be able to get the layering effect of the M behind her, I found that because I had already had some experience with using this particlar tool, I found it much easier to get accurate and neat cuttings. I also understood the layers are you have to use to create the overall image more the second time in photoshop.
I felt that my contents page and my cover are a lot better than my prelimniary, this is because of the colours I had used for them, I thought that it was quite bland compared to my final one. I really think that if these two magazines were to be on sale, my final one would be the best selling one because of the colours that have been used and the layout which gives a much more professional and cleaner appearance. When looking at other magazines, I defiinitley think that my cover doesn't have that music magazine look to it, I think I have leaned more into the fashion magazine look like V Magazine and W. But I think by making it look fashion related, this would be attracting more readers than you typical music magazine which just focuses on music when mine focuses on mainly music, but incoporates fashion and art aswell.
By looking at my final magazine, there are definitley some changes that I would make to it. For example with the front page, i feel as though there needs to be more writing, it looks kind of plain and if I hadn't use the bright colours, I really think that it wouldn't be an attractive cover. In the double page spread, I woud definitely change the layout of the text, maybe have more pictures in the columns of the artist and also use more fonts to bring out the importantr quotes from the article to make is stand out to the readers which would also make it more appealing as an overall page.